每次放学回到家，我带回的往往都是抱怨，没有一刻是安静下来的，可以用怨天尤人来表达了，可是我却没有发现身边只是默默倾听着的妈妈。
Every time I come home from school, I always complain. There is not a moment of silence, which can be expressed by complaining, but I didn't find my mother who is just listening quietly.
不知道什么時候起，妈妈看起来变得苍老了许多，经常默默无语。在以前，妈妈要是听了我这些灭人志气的话，早就生气的不得了了，吵起来也是昏天黑地。可是妈妈现在却变得不爱说话了。她的脸上常有疲惫之色。妈妈为什么有这样的变化，这让我十分不解，直到有一天，我看到了灯光下的妈妈。
I don't know when, my mother looks a lot older, often silent. In the past, my mother would have been very angry if she had listened to me. It was also dark to quarrel. But now my mother has become silent. Her face is often tired. Why mom has such a change, which makes me very confused, until one day, I saw the mother under the light.
那天夜里，天气一直阴沉，月光也不是很明亮。早已躺下的我，又悄悄地下了床，因为我突然想起一条作业还没有完成，或许是因为自己的小脾气在作怪，让我忘记了吧。我轻轻地打开门，准备把门口的书包拿进来。却忽然发现，一丝灯光从书房的门缝中透出。是妈妈忘记关灯了吗？我小心翼翼地走过去，透过门缝仔细查看——噢，是妈妈，是正伏在桌子上忙碌的妈妈，手里握着笔，正在写着什么。是的，妈妈为了生活需要努力工作，无论家庭的琐事多累，无论生活的重担多沉，却总是在我休息后默默工作。对我没有抱怨，只是在这里默默地努力工作……
That night, the weather was always gloomy and the moonlight was not very bright. I have already laid down, and quietly underground bed, because I suddenly think of a homework has not been completed, perhaps because of their own little temper in the mischief, let me forget it. I gently opened the door, ready to take the bag in. But suddenly found that a trace of light from the study of the crack in the door. Did mom forget to turn off the light? I cautiously walked over and looked through the crack of the door - Oh, it's mom, the busy mom on the desk, with a pen in her hand, and what she was writing. Yes, my mother works hard for the needs of life. No matter how tired the family is, no matter how heavy the burden of life is, she always works silently after my rest. I don't complain about it. I just work hard here
我悄悄地关上门，还是不要打扰妈妈了。妈妈的背影，是如此的熟悉，那一刻我百感交集，也终于懂得了爱的给予。透过门缝下的光亮，我深深地感受到，灯光下的妈妈最温暖！
I closed the door quietly, or don't disturb my mother. Mother's back, is so familiar, that moment I mixed feelings, and finally understand the love to give. Through the light under the door crack, I deeply feel that the mother under the light is the warmest!
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从生活中的一个小细节来表达亲情的味道，作文的笔法比较细腻，细致的内心活动描写，巧妙地照应了前后。
From a small detail of life to express the flavor of family affection, the writing method of the composition is more delicate, the detailed description of inner activities, cleverly looking after before and after.